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While I Slept

Bedtime thoughts when one can't focus on rest.

While I slept, while I slept and the night grew colder
She would come to my bedroom stepping softly
And draw a blanket about my shoulder
While I slept.

While I slept, while I slept in the dark still heat
She would come to my bedside stepping coolly
And smooth the twisted troubled sheet
While I slept.

Now she sleeps, sleeps under quiet rain
While nights grow warm or nights grow colder
And I wake and sleep and wake again
While she sleeps.

Source: Poetry U.S.A.

Reflection: The poem, “While I Slept” was a very strong poem because of all the things I could relate back to. In everyone single line of this poem I could infer back to my childhood with my mom with me where ever I go. I could remember all the things she would do for me. Tidy my bed, clean my sheets, help me go to sleep when I couldn't go to sleep. There's just so much more to say! This poem was a very strong poem that I could relate back to with my childhood. Overall, I thought that “While I Slept” was a very nice and strong poem. I hope that you would enjoy this poem too!

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