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Shotgun Baby

Love is killing me softly.

My heart was broken when you used a gun
You made a crime but you've escaped and ran
I'm mourning for our love ends in a span
You went with other guy to have fun.
When you left me I've felt that I'm dead
Because you shot a bullet upon my head
You're not contented and lashed my rib by double blade
I laid down on the weeds while my blood had shed.
Sometimes in our lives were like a soldier
We fought against destructors and never surrender
We always triumph in every battle
But you've betrayed me and became a rebel.
I deemed that our love is powerful than the universe
But I don't know you might give me a curse
I think you're sent from Heaven, an amazing grace
But my world became smaller, there's an empty space.
I don't know what's my fault, where I was wrong
Maybe that's you're attitude, you're not too strong
Oh, girl are you lsitening to this awful song?
It will shiver into your nerves and bones.
It's true that love will drive us crazy
We will not live alone, we really need somebody
But it hurts when I found a deceitful honey
Kill me now literally by shotgun, baby!

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Comments (6)
#1 by nobert soloria bermosa, Jun 20, 2008
nice post bro,thanks
#2 by tracy sardelli, Jun 20, 2008
nice poem, thank you for sharing.
#3 by salvatore, Jun 22, 2008
nice poem.
#4 by Ruby Hawk, Jun 22, 2008
Your poem is well thought-out and an enjoyable read.
#5 by Chris Hamilton, Jun 23, 2008
Excellent work thanks for sharing.
#6 by Daniel Canfield, Sep 2, 2008
Nice Poem
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